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Chapter Insight: What This Scene Reveals About the Story

This chapter uncovers emotional layers that quietly guide the story’s direction, revealing motivations beneath the surface. Their choices are shaped by deeper conflicts they struggle to express. Tension builds subtly, hinting at consequences that will echo beyond this scene. Emotional shifts here set the stage for how each character navigates challenges ahead.

Turning Points: Critical Moments That Shape the Chapter

This chapter introduces key shifts that alter the emotional tone and direction of the story. Confessions, confrontations, or hesitations act as catalysts, pushing characters to reassess themselves and each other. Small moments gain weight as they influence the broader arc.

Emotional Underflow: How Each Character Truly Feels Here

Behind every line lies an undercurrent of emotion the characters try to hide. Their internal struggles show through gestures and pauses, revealing truths they cannot fully voice. This chapter highlights how deeply their emotions shape their choices.

Shadows of the Past: Trauma & History Influencing This Chapter

Past experiences and old wounds influence every decision. Histories rise to the surface, adding weight to interactions and guiding present actions. Trauma and memory become driving forces in the unfolding drama.

Power Shifts: How Relationships Change in This Chapter

Emotional power shifts as characters confront uncomfortable truths. Vulnerability and strength move between them, reshaping relationships and forcing reconsideration of boundaries and roles.

Hidden Meanings: Symbolism Woven Into Key Scenes

Symbolic details enrich the chapter, mirroring internal struggles. Objects, settings, and gestures reveal deeper truths that words alone cannot express, tying personal conflict to the broader world.

Signals of What’s Coming: Foreshadowing in This Chapter

Subtle details foreshadow future conflicts and emotional revelations. Characters’ reactions hint at challenges ahead, planting seeds that will grow into significant turning points.

Lines That Hit Hard: Important Quotes & Why They Matter

Several lines carry emotional weight, revealing hidden fears, desires, and vulnerabilities. These quotes serve as anchors that stay with the reader and deepen the impact of the scene.

Chapter 1 

Mom, my study abroad application has been approved, and I plan to go overseas.” 

In the quiet living room, Ivy Wolfe’s voice was soft and shallow, like a drop of water falling into a pool. 

Ivy’s mother, sitting across the sofa, was overjoyed, Has it passed so quickly? When are you leaving?” 

Ten days later.” 

Ivy’s mother didn’t expect it to be so rushed. Amid the excitement, a sense of reluctance welled up in her eyes. Then I will go and help you pack your luggage now. It’s your first time going far away, and it’s overseas. I really can’t let go of my worries. So I contacted a friend from a few years ago. It just so happens that her son is also in Soltharion. If you have any problems, you can contact him. Don’t worry about bothering him, because you and that boy were childhood sweethearts. See if you can get along with each other. It would be best if you can, but if not, just be friends.” 

Ivy nodded and said, Okay, Mom.” 

Upon hearing this, Ivy’s mother was very surprised. Ivy, you agreed? You and your previous boyfriendfinally broke up?” 

Ivy fell silent all of a sudden. 

Rod’s father instantly understood what was going on and slammed the table, He has always 

refused to come back and meet us with you. He doesn’t truly care about you. It’s better to break up 

with this kind of boyfriend!” 

Boyfriend? What boyfriend?” 

A sudden voice broke the oppressive atmosphere in the living room. 

Three people turned their heads at the sound and saw Rod Archer entering through the door. 

He was dressed in a black shirt and black trousers, with a figure as graceful as jade and as straight 

as a pine tree. Every move he made exuded a lazy and noble demeanor. 

Ivy’s body trembled slightly as she stood up and called out to him, Brother.” 

Rod made a meaningful hmmsound, dropped the car keys, and went upstairs. 

In the evening, Ivy’s mother prepared a large table of dishes and opened a bottle of red wine. 

She raised her glass and smiled at her three family members, preparing to announce the good 

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news. Come on, let’s celebrate as a family today, celebrating that Ivy is about to” 

Ivy realized something was wrong and quickly interrupted her, Morn, this wine tastes a bit bitter, is it expired?” 

Is it expired? 

Ivy’s mother looked surprised, as it hadn’t expired yet, but Ivy had already used getting new wine as an excuse and dragged her to the kitchen. 

Mom, don’t tell my brother about my plan to go abroad for now.” 

Upon hearing this, Ivy’s mother found it a bit strange. 

But when she thought about the various care her stepson had shown towards her daughter, she slowly began to understand the difficult and inseparable bond between siblings and nodded in 

agreement. 

After hastily taking a few bites, Ivy got up and went back to her room. 

After washing up, she lay in bed and slowly fell asleep. 

Until midnight, there was a person beside her on time. 

A scorching breath fell on her neck, and the next second, soft lips gently pressed against it, lightly nibbling. The slightly cool dampness completely awakened Ivy, who was still drowsy. 

Her body stiffened, and she instinctively jerked away from him, her voice urgent and resistant, Rod!” 

What? Your family wants to introduce a boyfriend to you, so you won’t let me touch you anymore?In the dark night, Rod curled his lips, but the smile didn’t reach his eyes. His voice was extremely lazy, After all these years together with me, you don’t want to take responsibility?” 

Ivy knew that he had misunderstood, but she didn’t explain. 

Rod’s face grew cold in this endless silence. 

He reached out and pulled her into his arms, Ivy, have I ever told you that you are not allowed to have a boyfriend, you can only be mine.” 

Feeling the scorching heat coming from behind, Ivy didn’t want to argue with him, so she lied, I 

was on my period, not feeling well.” 

Upon hearing her submissive explanation, Rod’s expression improved slightly, but he couldn’t help but furrow his brow. So you just finished your period and it’s already back? Fine, I won’t touch you 

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today. Go to bed early. 

After saying that, he tightly embraced her in his arms. 

Listening to the soothing and peaceful sound of breathing in her ears, she tossed and turned, unable to sleep. 

No one knew that her boyfriend was her brother, Rod! 

At the age of twelve, her mother remarried into the Archer family, and she became the halfsister 

of the Archer family’s only son, Rod. 

At the age of fourteen, she called him brother, and he called her sister, appearing as a respectful 

brothersister duo in the eyes of others. 

At the age of eighteen, she secretly wrote a diary filled with his name, and it was discovered. He lazily leaned against her desk, smiling as he repeatedly read through the diary. Then, he grabbed her hand as she tried to take back the diary, and planted a kiss on her shy cheek. 

At the age of twenty, they tasted the forbidden fruit for the first time, and afterwards, they became 

addicted and couldn’t stop. 

During the day, they were siblings, but at night, they secretly engaged in a deadly entanglement, 

hiding it from everyone. 

Ivy has always been a wellbehaved girl since she was young, and being with Rod was the only foolish thing she had ever done in her life. 

She liked Rod so much that she even felt it didn’t matter if they never made their relationship public for a lifetime. They could secretly go overseas and get married then. 

But all these fantasies came crashing down half a month ago, abruptly ending his conversations 

with his friends. 

It was raining heavily that day. She ran to give Rod an umbrella, but just as she was about to open the compartment door, she heard his friend’s voice. 

Rod, what are you going to do about your stepmother’s daughter? Weren’t you planning to just play around and then break up? Why haven’t you ended it yet?” 

Yeah, you were with her back then, just to get back at her mom for marrying into the Archer family, right? Don’t tell me you had a change of heart,” 

Revenge? 

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He was with her, not because he liked her, but for revenge! 

Ivy’s face turned pale, her mind buzzed, and her whole body began to tremble uncontrollably, but she stubbornly didn’t leave, wanting to hear Rod’s response. 

In the next second, Rod’s indifferent and cruel voice reached her ears word by word. 

How can I make her suffer more if I don’t play for a while?” 

At that moment, the whole audience burst into laughter, while she stood outside the door, feeling as if she had fallen into an ice cellar. 

Originally, he didn’t like her. Being with her, calling her his girlfriend, and spending passionate nights with her, was just revenge for her mother taking his mother’s place?! 

Ivy’s mother had to continue living with Rod’s father, she couldn’t make a big fuss about this 

matter. 

After much thought, the only solution she could come up with was to escape, to leave this home and 

also leave him. 

So she applied for studying abroad. 

Now, there are only ten days left since she quietly left. 

Watching the countdown reminder on her phone, Ivy raised her hand and pulled down Rod’s hand, which was wrapped around her waist. 

A few minutes later, he hugged her again. When she tried to pull away, he unconsciously hugged her again. 

Her patience was exhausted in the repeated tugofwar, so she simply brought a pillow and placed 

it between the two of them. 

This time, he finally calmed down. 

Ivy was also quiet. 

She knew that there would soon be a period between them. 

She no longer belonged to him, nor was she his possession anymore. 

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Closing Reflection

This chapter ends with shifting emotions and unresolved tension, hinting at deeper conflicts and unspoken truths. Choices made here will shape what follows, and the weight of this moment lingers as a quiet turning point.

Next Chapter Teaser

The next chapter will build on these consequences, drawing characters into challenges they can no longer avoid. Tension will rise, secrets will surface, and new revelations will reshape the path ahead.

Reader Engagement

This chapter raises questions about motivations, emotions, and relationships. Which moment mattered most? Who revealed more than they intended? How might events here reshape the bonds between characters?

World/Lore Connection

Beneath the emotions lies the broader world’s influence. Unseen rules, histories, and power structures shape choices and outcomes, adding weight to every action taken in this scene.

One-Line Ending

With this chapter complete, the story steps into a new phase filled with uncertainty, tension, and possibility.

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